Jun, I like your concept on Angel Beats. I really do.
But the way you present it from start to end is just plain wrong.
The last episode fails in so many ways I cannot describe. It would have worked so, so much better if Kanade did not go ooc. Because, you know, if she remained the stoic girl she was throughout the episode, and if she had shown actual emotions at just the scene with Yuzuru (aside from the Yuri part), that would have been a brilliant scene.